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we will make the sun witness this friendship we will make our steps witness this friendship we will make the sun bet the moon it will rise at night two souls are sharing on the honour road are not holding hands but are holding each others' souls their hearts are bumping but they aren't lovers they haven't felt the meaning of a true friendship... they are now... they are looking into each others' eyes reading what's inside they are sharing the life under the names of honour, trust, belief and sharing the four roads they are together hardly trying to pass 'em like we cross the sea to the other side of the beach when my lips are moving, no lie will come out of it its an honest friendship the road's lights rised to dance and the way is surprised Does honour still exist? Does purity still exist? Wondering drew on the lines of the road, made it smile do you see this smile with no teeth behind no one will be wild or convert just a quiet smile so gentle put the name of this friendship a friendship is a line, let's draw it... invade our feelings touching it deeply let our eyes cry... give warmth with no touch let our hands shiver give the touch with feelings the lights rised; spot on two souls walking like are whispering to the road whispering to the night just a kind, warm are the names define the friendship like a piece of cake with a sweet taste not ended but flood us just it's a piece of my friendship for u
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Those are such sweet words but as a girl who hates sugar in her tea I have got to say I would much prefer the most romantic thing my husband says to me.........
We are two arses in one pair of pants
I think that says more than all those words above!!
quote:Originally posted by Penny: Those are such sweet words but as a girl who hates sugar in her tea I have got to say I would much prefer the most romantic thing my husband says to me.........
We are two arses in one pair of pants
I think that says more than all those words above!!
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Everyone has its own way to describe his/her feelings,
and should we be all like your husband
quote:Originally posted by Penny: Those are such sweet words but as a girl who hates sugar in her tea I have got to say I would much prefer the most romantic thing my husband says to me.........
We are two arses in one pair of pants
I think that says more than all those words above!!
quote:Originally posted by Penny: Those are such sweet words but as a girl who hates sugar in her tea I have got to say I would much prefer the most romantic thing my husband says to me.........
We are two arses in one pair of pants
I think that says more than all those words above!!
quote:Originally posted by Penny: Those are such sweet words but as a girl who hates sugar in her tea I have got to say I would much prefer the most romantic thing my husband says to me.........
We are two arses in one pair of pants
I think that says more than all those words above!!
heheh penny you're stealing my expression! heh its ok no wrries!
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hello...river of love this is my frist time here...i like all those words...they are so much sweet words and they are meaning of love...i just think, you are sweet heart person...but i like coffee without sugar...
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7aya I think it is an Egyptian saying, can you give me it in arabic, I have forgotten it.
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I am also new here i have been a 2 days here thanks for your pretty comment
hope c u always here
quote:Originally posted by sarahwannabee: hello...river of love this is my frist time here...i like all those words...they are so much sweet words and they are meaning of love...i just think, you are sweet heart person...but i like coffee without sugar...
jennifer
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I used to write poems myself and seriously I can't really get behind your wording.
You do try to write about true and honest friendship if I am correct but I believe you definitely put too much romantic wording into it like you would do in a love poem.
And you really need to draw the line at one point, if you want to admit a outstanding friendship to someone forget about the sun, the eyes, feelings and touch.
I also had a hard time to understand everything what you wrote it was somehow confusing but its possible because I am a non-native English speaker.
Anyway, keep on writing, its worth it because the right girl will understand what you mean and thats all what matters, right?
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im really so thanks for yr reply, maybe u r right, maybe i wanna have everything in romantic way...
beside im really not so good in english, but im trying to hold things
but i love to do write poems, it relaxes me
thanks again, hope hear from u soon
quote:Originally posted by Tigerlily: I used to write poems myself and seriously I can't really get behind your wording.
You do try to write about true and honest friendship if I am correct but I believe you definitely put too much romantic wording into it like you would do in a love poem.
And you really need to draw the line at one point, if you want to admit a outstanding friendship to someone forget about the sun, the eyes, feelings and touch.
I also had a hard time to understand everything what you wrote it was somehow confusing but its possible because I am a non-native English speaker.
Anyway, keep on writing, its worth it because the right girl will understand what you mean and thats all what matters, right?
quote:Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: [b] we will make the sun witness this friendship we will make our steps witness this friendship we will make the sun bet the moon it will rise at night two souls are sharing on the honour road are not holding hands but are holding each others' souls their hearts are bumping but they aren't lovers they haven't felt the meaning of a true friendship... they are now... they are looking into each others' eyes reading what's inside they are sharing the life under the names of honour, trust, belief and sharing the four roads they are together hardly trying to pass 'em like we cross the sea to the other side of the beach when my lips are moving, no lie will come out of it its an honest friendship the road's lights rised to dance and the way is surprised Does honour still exist? Does purity still exist? Wondering drew on the lines of the road, made it smile do you see this smile with no teeth behind no one will be wild or convert just a quiet smile so gentle put the name of this friendship a friendship is a line, let's draw it... invade our feelings touching it deeply let our eyes cry... give warmth with no touch let our hands shiver give the touch with feelings the lights rised; spot on two souls walking like are whispering to the road whispering to the night just a kind, warm are the names define the friendship like a piece of cake with a sweet taste not ended but flood us just it's a piece of my friendship for u
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Few poets are careful with what they say, Poem is tempting indeed :
كان ياما كان..كان ياما كان .الحب مالي بيتنا ومدفينا الحنان
جانا الزمان ...سرق منا فرحتنا والراحه والآمان
حبيبي كان هنا...مالي الدنيا علي بالحب والهنا...
حبيبي ياأنا...ياأغلى من عنيه ...نسيت مين أنا؟
أنا الحب اللي كان...اللي نسيته زمان...من قبل الآوان
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Nice song Troubles, You know I was looking for that song for months ago. But didnt know the name of the singer. But personally my fave one is 3alli Gara by Asala and Kalemat by Magda al Roumy. I listen to those everyday!
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: Nice song Troubles, You know I was looking for that song for months ago. But didnt know the name of the singer. But personally my fave one is 3alli Gara by Asala and Kalemat by Magda al Roumy. I listen to those everyday!
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: Nice song Troubles, You know I was looking for that song for months ago. But didnt know the name of the singer. But personally my fave one is 3alli Gara by Asala and Kalemat by Magda al Roumy. I listen to those everyday!
I like 3alli gara bas il asli asli ya sara, that's why I like the original 3alli gara by Olaia : http://www.sawari.com/index_files/3ALYEA.htm You gotta download it if you don't have it already.
quote:Originally posted by Troubles101: I like 3alli gara bas il asli asli ya sara, that's why I like the original 3alli gara by Olaia : http://www.sawari.com/index_files/3ALYEA.htm You gotta download it if you don't have it already.
The page you gave me doesnt work. I would love to have it! such a nice song. does 6arab.com have it?
even i am not egyptian woman...but i am one of them who love pomes so much...i used to write pomes to my friend often...they were love pomes also...i think, about pomes, most of them are sweet words and it also makes who falling in love happy with it...thanks for wellcom me here... i am a thai woman
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thats gr8 to hear from yea, that u r writting poems too, i have much affection i think so . would you mind, if we exchange our poems
quote:Originally posted by sarahwannabee: hello...one more time
even i am not egyptian woman...but i am one of them who love pomes so much...i used to write pomes to my friend often...they were love pomes also...i think, about pomes, most of them are sweet words and it also makes who falling in love happy with it...thanks for wellcom me here... i am a thai woman
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hello ..river of love all right we can exchange pomes to each other..but my pome is not very well..just for example... Has anyone held your hand today ? Did someone sit beside you when it was Was someone there to cry with you ? Did you have to hurt alone? Did you have to laugh alone when you were happy ? Was someone there you could tell your secret to? Did someone sit and listen when it didn't very important? Has anyone told you today '' i love you '' ?
It may not always seem like it, But I am right here and I am yours always I feel sad when yours sad, When you hurt I feel hurt too, I am happy when yours happy, When you want to talk I listen with my heart....
Do u know whats the wonderful, is to trying to keep express your feelings, it shouldnt you have to write when you be in love, but the most pretty when you do have the feelings, as much as they are so strong and pure
it doesnt so matter the Quality of poem, yeah it may important for other to understand what r u going to saay, but at least your lovely heart feel them..
sometimes it happeness with me, ppl are trying to understand me, they may got confussed with my words, but i think at least they will have clue abt the feelings you have inside, or trying to express
quote:Originally posted by sarahwannabee: hello ..river of love all right we can exchange pomes to each other..but my pome is not very well..just for example... Has anyone held your hand today ? Did someone sit beside you when it was Was someone there to cry with you ? Did you have to hurt alone? Did you have to laugh alone when you were happy ? Was someone there you could tell your secret to? Did someone sit and listen when it didn't very important? Has anyone told you today '' i love you '' ?
It may not always seem like it, But I am right here and I am yours always I feel sad when yours sad, When you hurt I feel hurt too, I am happy when yours happy, When you want to talk I listen with my heart....
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Oh it has been ages since I wrote poetry! But after entering this private school, which made me be a slave to my reading. Then I mean I studied 24/7!! after that I just didnt have time for writing poetry. My poetry was not that much love related actually. It was mostly about politics, friendship, war and the world.
it was fun as long as it lasted. Now I basically write short stories. but not often though.
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Hi, Sarah, let me have a Taste, from one of yr old poems, or current short stories
it may your short stories fit the age of fast delivery :d
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: Oh it has been ages since I wrote poetry! But after entering this private school, which made me be a slave to my reading. Then I mean I studied 24/7!! after that I just didnt have time for writing poetry. My poetry was not that much love related actually. It was mostly about politics, friendship, war and the world.
it was fun as long as it lasted. Now I basically write short stories. but not often though.
yes yes..river of love...after you tasted my old pome already...i wanna know how did you feel about that??? and i hope that, my old pome may makes someone feel of it...
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it is so clear you miss much careness in your poem, you wanna someone hold u warmly in a so good gentle way..
beside share all yr life, and fine details, as u r sure he will share them and feel them like it is his own life
...you wanna be like caty cat....
quote:Originally posted by sarahwannabee: hello... thanks again
yes yes..river of love...after you tasted my old pome already...i wanna know how did you feel about that??? and i hope that, my old pome may makes someone feel of it...
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