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everyday there is a sun everyday there is a moon but there isnt rain everyday, there are my tears as im just walking in a wide way, with no way while the sun is striking my face drying my tears i cant stop walking, as there is someone forcing me the sun drawing me to the way of strongers where is no mercy, where is no gulity, where is no feelings when u die as human, live as a bone the place where you are so wild the feelings are dying the smile is fang when you became a rock of hard feelings ice tears are drying on your face, as sculpture the power of live in the jungle, where the ppl are animals when someone can hurt, hate, ..... with no sense of human nature even the heart of lovers got died as the sun lights are strength somene came beside me, force me to fight the evil inside me as the good fight the evil, as the sea races the winds someone so strong so weak so smart so kind the moon is going to appea whispeing me on the face of the sea reflect the lights of the tears were falling on my face i have just turned to the good face, with romantic feelings able to fight the hard heart the sun left inside me as my lover is going to be close to me melt the ice on my face, reek the tears to drop the rain i was dreaming the rain of lover drops, when no one can resist deeply drop on our hearts break the hard rock inside you will not turn my hard again, to a rock feelings i will relase the tears, i will release the names, i will tell you my feelings no one can stop me, no distance, or places as my heart touches yours, and affect you under the name of dreaming you wont leave me, as my lips moving spelling your names, after the words "I Love ... " I LOVE YOU
quote:Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: Soum, Cuz i did know some stuff about her, and i know she is sensistive gurl, beside i do like to be beside her
Dalia, cuz in one of my thread she miss understood me, so i liked to let her forget that, and make it friendly
You know river of **** , you are a dork.
You might think its charming or cute to come on to women online, but its cheesy, and just plain psyhco.
This kind of carousing might be okay in person, when you know the girl well. But online it just makes you look like a personal safety hazard.
Grow up boy, you are going to scare off any sane woman you might've had a chance for.
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quote:Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: IS IT GOOD TO SAY TO SOMEONE "Less Valuable"
Anyway, it is reflect you
Ya river: Every person is unique and valuable by nature, by birth..khel2et rabena. We should be take care of this value, add to it..not take from it yaani. The way u somehow put yr words makes yr value decrease, bcz unfortunately you do tend to draw yrself as "single and seeking"-which might or might not be the case! So yes, i think less valuable makes sense yaani.
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You are right, i shouldnt attach their names to the Thread title...
But i just surprised, when The CROW wrote a thread abt the gurl he met, no one attack like what happened here
Thanks for your gentle way Jannah
quote:Originally posted by Paint Me As I Am: ........................................... Maybe- would have been better to just e-mail them that ... or better yet- not address it to any person- but, just left as part of ur writting..
Keep the faith.. Salam... Jannah
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River, i was only asking why for them in praticular.
Anyway, i like some verses you wrote like when u die as human, live as a bone when you became a rock of hard feelings ice tears are drying on your face, as sculpture
but i cant discribe humilie ppl as the power of live in the jungle, where the ppl are animals when someone can hurt, hate, ..... with no sense of human nature
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It just show the how life is wild, and how we could illminate this wild as we could
quote:Originally posted by Lonely: River, i was only asking why for them in praticular.
Anyway, i like some verses you wrote like when u die as human, live as a bone when you became a rock of hard feelings ice tears are drying on your face, as sculpture
but i cant discribe humilie ppl as the power of live in the jungle, where the ppl are animals when someone can hurt, hate, ..... with no sense of human nature
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u really let me smile with heart cheer up, but i will mention something, i dont have sis, and i did read something abt soum, so i would like to be more care abt her as a sis, so i sent her that as a gift
hmmm, wheter dalia, as i mentioned, in some of my thread she miss understood me, so i liked to let her forget and keep like friends
so if u wanna me send u a Gift lilly, fist show u r anger at me
and really thanks for your nice words
quote:Originally posted by Tigerlily:
Look River, the other women here on ES are upset because you didn't dedicate your wonderful poem to them too. Please treat all of us equally on here.
Btw, I am sure Dalia will very much appreciate your words and that you think about her.
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why u have to be afriad... the romatic isnt just words, it is a sense, we could sense in the words, if u missed to feel the romantic words, so they are not worthy...
just it is a candle lights in the dark night give me the light to have way in the dark with no guid sign on sidewalk of life
Could u email me on River_0f_l0ve@hotmail.com
quote:Originally posted by Dalia: Errrr ... I don't remember misunderstanding you anywhere.
But I'm not a huge fan of too many pseudo-romantic words I'm afraid ...
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Thats sweet River, eventhough sometimes i tend to not understand your poems. But they are beautiful anyways. and I am sure its appreciated to whom you wrote it too Posts: 2519 | Registered: Apr 2005
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I like your in writing you, it is imaginative, and sensistive, with a good sense like i do living the events u passed by..or like i was beside at the time u were living that..
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: Thats sweet River, eventhough sometimes i tend to not understand your poems. But they are beautiful anyways. and I am sure its appreciated to whom you wrote it too
quote:Originally posted by eaasalam: Come on everybody! It is supposed to be an open forum, right? I though everybody can write to anybody...So, what's the problem?
I think we are addicts to the catfights in ES, and we look for anything to make an argument....
I love to read it. So, go on!!!
hehe you're so right! I dont know why but everyone seem to take everything too seriously. I just like to lean back and drink my juice and read it all the action here
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thanks mayram, im really to hear yr words sound...i think they are alcoholich for attack and fight
quote:Originally posted by eaasalam: Come on everybody! It is supposed to be an open forum, right? I though everybody can write to anybody...So, what's the problem?
I think we are addicts to the catfights in ES, and we look for anything to make an argument....
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i hope most ppl lean back like u and read all of it
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: hehe you're so right! I dont know why but everyone seem to take everything too seriously. I just like to lean back and drink my juice and read it all the action here
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Hey, River wrote a poem and all is great. If he wants to dedicate it to Tom and Jerry so be it. What's the problem? Also, what is the problem to be single and looking? No restrictions from that on ES as far as I am concerned, just class and good taste are always highly appreciated here. If we can talk about the size of genitals, why can't we tolerate single and looking? Unless it hits the nerver of single, lonely, and too bitter to look. Posts: 2238 | From: Mother Earth | Registered: Jun 2004
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quote:Originally posted by Karah_Mia: Hey, River wrote a poem and all is great. If he wants to dedicate it to Tom and Jerry so be it. What's the problem? Also, what is the problem to be single and looking? No restrictions from that on ES as far as I am concerned, just class and good taste are always highly appreciated here. If we can talk about the size of genitals, why can't we tolerate single and looking? Unless it hits the nerver of single, lonely, and too bitter to look.
hehe this is the most comment i have heard that really makes sense!! Love your comments as always
quote:Originally posted by Karah_Mia: Hey, River wrote a poem and all is great. If he wants to dedicate it to Tom and Jerry so be it. What's the problem? Also, what is the problem to be single and looking? No restrictions from that on ES as far as I am concerned, just class and good taste are always highly appreciated here. If we can talk about the size of genitals, why can't we tolerate single and looking? Unless it hits the nerver of single, lonely, and too bitter to look.
quote:Originally posted by Karah_Mia: Hey, River wrote a poem and all is great. If he wants to dedicate it to Tom and Jerry so be it. What's the problem? Also, what is the problem to be single and looking? No restrictions from that on ES as far as I am concerned, just class and good taste are always highly appreciated here. If we can talk about the size of genitals, why can't we tolerate single and looking? Unless it hits the nerver of single, lonely, and too bitter to look.
Yes Karah! i agree with u An if they say they arne't bitter, theres got to be another more logical explanation. Like they have miniscule genitals and a cartoon phobia right?
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I think your poem is deep and anyone can relate to the feelings you expressed. For whatever reason people focused on who you were writing it to, instead of the content of your words. You articulate your feelings very well and it shows your vulnerability. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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quote:Originally posted by sonomod: Yeah I am cynical. Damn Straight! lol.
I don't believe in foolish words with empty meanings. I prefer action and commitments.
I like results, sticking to your word.
Ah!Yeah! but, for potential action and commitments to be initiated. These things gotto have a starting point! and what better way than romatisism in the form of nice words?
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quote:Originally posted by sonomod: Yeah I am cynical. Damn Straight! lol.
I don't believe in foolish words with empty meanings. I prefer action and commitments.
I like results, sticking to your word.
Even as a non cynic, I have to agree with you S or perhaps after a certain age you just get past all this airy fairy stuff.Life and responsibilities does that to you in the end. Ah well the young can dream.......god don't they do any work these days?
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how u judge someone u dont know how do u know they are Foolish Words with empty meanings, the one who said something like that who is empty cuz has nothing to give or feel..
A words are a translation of feelings. it is a gift for memory. draw a smile...
beside no one does not like the action, but the words are a nice way to express..
quote:Originally posted by sonomod: Yeah I am cynical. Damn Straight! lol.
I don't believe in foolish words with empty meanings. I prefer action and commitments.
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Thanks for your pretty emoitions..could i know u much more if u dont mind
quote:Originally posted by KeepinItReal: I think your poem is deep and anyone can relate to the feelings you expressed. For whatever reason people focused on who you were writing it to, instead of the content of your words. You articulate your feelings very well and it shows your vulnerability. Thank you for sharing it with us.
quote:Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: I like your in writing you, it is imaginative, and sensistive, with a good sense like i do living the events u passed by..or like i was beside at the time u were living that..
Sorry for being so late in reply. I was on a mission trying to execute a huge mosquito monster in my room. Mission completed
Thanks for your words. i just hope some other think the same. I am taking a huge step now and i have decided to publish a book. I just hope it wont be awarded for the worst book of the year!
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i was doing like u, at first time i started to write and trying to express i was just writring for myself, but i never ever wrote something to just get attention and so on. all my writes are from inside move, moved by the mood im passing by...
then i started communicate with some ppl..there is a great site for poems called Piptalk, try it
quote:Originally posted by Paint Me As I Am: I like to write alot- as well as poetry and just writting in general..
maybe, one day i will express myself as well and openly.. for now, i pretty much just email-what i write back to myself (like a blog-journal)and then i look back at times to see how i either dealt with things at certian time in my life.. been doing this for almost 6yrs, thinking one day i would make a book on it..
Sorry, wasn't trying to pin point anything towards u "RIVER"
Just we all have our ways how we want to express our selves- some in a simple fashion, and others at a deeper level..
Take care...Jannah
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ISA i believe u will do it, And will be the most rich girl on the world for this year due to your much sells for your book isa...
but i will advise you, do not believe that here could be more ppl feel same, cuz they have the award of ATTACKING
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: [QUOTE]Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: [b]I like your in writing you, it is imaginative, and sensistive, with a good sense like i do living the events u passed by..or like i was beside at the time u were living that..
Sorry for being so late in reply. I was on a mission trying to execute a huge mosquito monster in my room. Mission completed
Thanks for your words. i just hope some other think the same. I am taking a huge step now and i have decided to publish a book. I just hope it wont be awarded for the worst book of the year!
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Really it expresses much about me. i just find my hand moveing write what i do feel, and much times i spell things are so greate i think so, but can not remember them again to right, it something come like a glance of light
quote:Originally posted by Paint Me As I Am: ..........................................
Writting has been the best way for me to deal with many things in my life..Especially when u live in a non-muslim/arab area..
Good luck, best wishes-keep writting... Salam.....Jannah
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it just comes at moment and then fade out. like when im sleeping, i found myself speaking, and i do not like to interrupt myself by getting up and write what i do say, cuz i may lose what im going to say..even i do try to repat what i have just said just got a pieces.. one of my friend told me she is sleeping while she has a walkman beside her to record everything come at time
with my best wishes WALEED
quote:Originally posted by Paint Me As I Am: When u get in that mood to write save it, either to a note pad on ur pc.. or u can simpley E-Mail it back to ur self and u will have it saved.. Its really intresting to go back and re-read all that u have written.. Its a great way to express what on ur mind..
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Oh that used to happen sometimes before. I used to let a piece of paper and pen beside my bed. but that was a looong time ago.
Paint me as I am, that is a good idea. But now I dont write that much poetry anymore, basically short stories. So i just write them on my laptop and keep them there.
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The most strange when i do read them again after a long time, i dont believe that i who worte these words
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: Oh that used to happen sometimes before. I used to let a piece of paper and pen beside my bed. but that was a looong time ago.
Paint me as I am, that is a good idea. But now I dont write that much poetry anymore, basically short stories. So i just write them on my laptop and keep them there.
quote:Originally posted by river_0f_l0ve: The most strange when i do read them again after a long time, i dont believe that i who worte these words
lol, that used to happen to me too. I never wrote my name. And I used to keep them in a box, with other poems from other writers and stuff like that. so till today some of them i still dont know if it was me who wrote it or some writer..gets very confusing sometimes
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loooooooool, but i think u could recognize that by smell the way u used to express yr feelings, unless u r not lucky and someone else has same yr way
quote:Originally posted by Serendipity: lol, that used to happen to me too. I never wrote my name. And I used to keep them in a box, with other poems from other writers and stuff like that. so till today some of them i still dont know if it was me who wrote it or some writer..gets very confusing sometimes
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An if they say they arne't bitter, theres got to be another more logical explanation. Like they have miniscule genitals and a cartoon phobia right? 
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