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Posted by BrandonP (Member # 3735) on :

Racing Into Trouble

I wrote a short historical-adventure story starring the Nile Valley queens Cleopatra and Amanirenas when they would have been young princesses. They start the story racing chariots out in the desert south of Alexandria, but then have a run in with hostile Libyan tribesmen. Please take a look and tell me what you guys think!

UPDATE:

And here's another story starring these two again, this time when they're older:

The Brood of Apep

Posted by BrandonP (Member # 3735) on :

You can listen to me read my new story out loud on YouTube too:

Racing Into Trouble

Posted by BrandonP (Member # 3735) on :

A map of the setting, in case it helps you picture it:

Posted by BrandonP (Member # 3735) on :

Another short story starring Cleopatra and Amanirenas, this time when both are older and have become queens of their respective countries:

The Brood of Apep

Here, they're exploring an abandoned temple in search of treasure, but it's not ancient secrets they really have to fear...